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新托福与雅思大作文异同点

发布：北京雅思培训学校 点击数：发布时间：20##-1-23 16:17:38

新托福网考自登陆以来，在整个留学英语考试市场掀起了轩然大波。而新托福考试在考试形式方面的改革也为所有人津津乐道。虽然从本质上来说，新托福考试和老托福考试相比，增加了交流技能的考核，但是在形式上，相比雅思对于交流技能的考核和评定还是有着比较明显的区别的。将分三个方面阐述雅思和新托福在写作考试中对于议论文的考试形式和交流技能评定的异同之处。在本文中，笔者将重点着眼于两者在考试形式方面的差别。

关键字：写作的输入要求、时间要求、字数要求和分值比例

在雅思考试中，除了口语外的三门学科都是采取笔试的形式。写作任务中的议论文部分则要求考生在40分钟内写一篇至少为250个词的文章。参加过培训或者实际考试的考生都知道，老师在培训的过程中常常会让学生留45分钟左右的时间来写议论文。因为相对雅思写作任务中的另一项---图表描述作文来说，议论文所需要的构思时间和思考表达方法的时间都要长一些。而在字数方面，雅思考试也有着比较严格的要求。一般如果写不到规定的字数，考官会认为考生没有完全完成任务，没有提供足够多的语言资料来让考官评判考生的英语水平，有的考生也会因此而在考试中失分。因为雅思写作的两个部分在写作总分计算的时候所取的比例不相同---图表作文1/3；议论文2/3，议论文成为了教师培训和学生学习的重点。

新托福考试在写作的考试形式上则略有不同。从议论文角度来讲，它要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇至少300个词的文章。这个“30分钟”的要求是不可变的。也就是说，考生即使在第一部分的综合写作任务中没有用满规定的20分钟时间来完成，那节省下来的时间也不可能被叠加到第二个部分的独立写作任务，也就是议论文的写作中去。所以单从考试时间和字数要求上来看，似乎新托福要比雅思更严格一些。但是，朗阁海外考试研究中心的老师分析了新托福满分范文后却发现，很多文章都没有达到300个词的最少字数，却一样得到了满分。可见，新托福可能更注重议论的方式和语言的质量，而不是一味在字数上做文章。另外，新托福写作考试的两个部分满分均为5分，考生最后的得分是平均了这两个写作任务的得分后得出的。而目前考生对综合写作任务的掌握情况比较陌生和不适应。相反，对于议论的逻辑和方式则比较能够掌握，所以，新托福的教师和考生至少在这两个任务上要花相同的精力去应对。甚至，在综合技能写作上花的时间要更多一些。

值得一提的是，新托福考试的宗旨是最大程度模拟考生在海外学习过程中会遇到的情境（Academic Settings），因此采用的是电脑键盘输入的方式。这一方式对于考生来说既有优点又有缺点。优点是：因为考官在评分过程中会考虑到考生写的议论文是第一稿，所以很多小的拼写错误，甚至是不影响理解的语法错误都不会导致考生直接失分。而缺点为：很多考生因为不熟悉键盘输入的方法或者盲打的方法而导致在考试中遭遇表达障碍。

第二篇：雅思作文小结

task 1 You r going to London to take a training course for a month. Pls write a letter tothe local accomodation agency to prepare a flat for u. U should tell him ur information, ur requirement, when u would arrive.

task 2 Today s parents spend too little time staying with their children and use television to make their children keep quiet.explain the reason and results by using ur relevant expierence. ■Version 57

Task 1 is a reference letter for your friend to work with foreign teenagers. Describe his or her character and why you recommend her. I think, if you practice more writing before the test, especial those topics that are given by JIAHUA, writing will not be a big problem.

Task 2 In most part of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate.

In the form of an assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions. This one is among the 15 topics that JIAHUA has laid emphasis on (No 31) Acdemic .

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Task 1：两个bar charts，关于美国一个主要航空公司从一月到二月的情况。第一个是percentage of flights on time；第二个是lost baggages complains。

Task 2：许多人说为了不断提高教育质量，就应该鼓励学生去评价和批评老师，另一些人说，这样做将导致教室里的尊敬与纪律消失。讨论这两种观点

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Task one: the pie charts below show the percentage of total music sale shared by different companies in the year 1990,1995 and 20xx.

Task two: recent statistics show that the crimes by the young people in the major city of the world are on the increase. Give your analysis of the reasons and the solutions.

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Task1) A bar chart shows the percentage of emploment of women in 3 sections in 4 diferrent countries.

Task2)Modern technology has influenced people s entertaiment,makes people less creative.Agree&Disagree?

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第一部分：两个曲线图，有关19xx年到19xx年美国property crimes和violent crimes的数字变化

第二部分：Many people believe that we have developed into a "throw-away society" which is filling with plastic bags and rubbish.

TASK 1 You took your family had a good meal in a local restaurant. Write a letter to the newsper to tell about it, describ the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth for other people to visit.

TASK 2. Choose an invertion, telephone or computer, and tell how it has changed our life. Are the changes all possitive or negative?

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tesk1 一个table给出关于澳洲生活在贫困中的家庭类型的数目与百分比。

一开始的时候下笔太快结果写到一半发现会错表格的意思，然后擦掉重写，浪费了很多时间，结果tesk2的conclntion不够时间写！痛苦啊~~~)

tesk2 比较型的文章，给出几种类型的media然后让你选三种出来比较，并要求说出你认为哪一种media能在获取信息方面有最大的effect。

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task 1 有两个图，一个曲线，一个饼状图，关于英国electricity在summer和winter的使用情况和用在一些电器上的比率。

task 2 的题目绝了。

happiness is considered important to peoplewhy are the definitions of happiness different?(大概是这样，意思就是问为什么幸福的定义如此不同和难下这个定义)what is the factors in achieving happiness give some examples and relavent evidence.

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TASK 1是给你一个TABLE和一个CHART，分别说europe usa Canada的妇女受的高等教育的比例，其中欧洲中分丹麦瑞士等，第二个CHART说各个MAJOR 中女学生所占的比例，有HUMANITIES LAW MEDICINE ENGIEERING AND COMPUTER SCIENCE SOCIAL SCIENCE AND SO ON

task2： Most countries spend a large amount of money in weapons to defend themselves though they are not at war. To the countries it should spend money to help the citizens for whom in the countries are poor and disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree this statement.

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task1是三个公司的税后赢利profits的曲线图curve chart.

task2是调查表明世界城市在变大，有个单词要注意enomous，当时不知道这个单词意思，还好，蒙对了。要求你find the causes和可能的consequence...，上过深圳环球孙头课的同学可以看孙头课上发的讲义，即causes and solutions类型的文章，背背模板套句。 ■Version 49

task1讲英国人口从大城市中迁出和主要原因第一个bar chart 是3D的，是population decrease rate in manchester, birmingham, livepool and somewhere :P 四个城市，百分比中间两个高40%上下吧，另外两个低，第二个是households认为城市中最严重的问题 第一是crime超过60%，第二是rubbish 40%多 还有noise, neighbour等一共5个bar : waste disposal become increasing problem how do you think it is true and give some suggestion for goverment and individuals how to reduce the rubbish being producing.

task2Waste disposal presents increasing problems, especially in urban areas. How true do you think? give some suggestion for the government and individuals how to reduce the amount of rubbish.

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1、五个国家的失业率表格

2、有的家庭不买电视为了孩子有时间去创造发明，disagree or agree ？

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小作文是写4个国家在工业，农业和家用用水的状况是个BAR CHART。大作文是写机器人是给人们带来好处还是危险。 今后intelligent machines象robots会越来越多的应用，它将能做许多人类能做的事。请讨论这种想法benefits和dagers。

第一篇是关于四个国家在家庭用水，农业和工业的人均用水量，很好写，也没有什么困难看懂。第二篇是写机器人的好处和坏处，还可以吧，也不是很难.

task 1 is 4 column chart! showing the amount of water use in 4 countries in 3 categories(agriculture,household,industy). in agi. australia leads 1st, in household,industy, america is no.1 the U.K, no wonder a country full of gentleman, always the last one, japan strives for the 3rd place!

task 2 is the wildly using of robots will bring our human beings danger,use ur own view tell sb ur thoughts on it: a blessing or a curse?

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Task 1,关于1970,1990,20xx三个时代英国人在transport(Cars & Public transport)和 communications(Postal services & Tele-communication)花销上的变化---柱状图. 很直观,很容易组织结构.20分钟搞定200字.

Task 2,是说现在有人用live animals进行research.有人觉得cruel and unnecessary;有人认为是可行的for the interests of human.Discuss the two views(注意,这很重要)题目很有代表性,如果比较爱看动物世界和探索类节目加上如果是半个动物保护主义者,肯定两方面都有话说.结构是典型的平衡型:开头,观点1,观点2,最后陈述自己的倾向.37分钟,400字.

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TASK1，讲一个在KINGSTOWN里19xx年到20xx年外国学生的人数变化，分两方面UNIVERSITY和SECONDARY SCHOOL。简单。 A bar chart shows the change in the number of international students in universities and secondary school from 1996 to 20xx.

TASK2，(大意)It is said that today people’s live are becoming increasingly stressful. What’s the reason of it occur and how to solve the problem?

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一、英国xx年间能源原料状况，折线图。当然是新的干净能源上升，污染的下降啊

二、老人生活在养老院好还是在家好

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作文一：三个PIE CHARTS shows the changes in the consumption of energy from different energies in different time (1928,195?,1998). Energies was composed of OIL, NATURAL GAS, COAL, OTHER and in 1998 NUCLEAR ENERGY was introduced.

作文二：Scientific and technology advances was benefit in our daily life today. However, most of scientists no longer be able to find the solutions of the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Tell reasons.

详细大作文题目:

1. new invention (computer phone etc) more and more change people live .

2. will it bring some positve or negtive effect ?

3. answer your questions with your relevent example of your experenice

TASK2：作文是写科学创造了现代社会，可有人认为科学家在今后不再可能有什么科技创造了，你认为如何？

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第一是英国四种能源的线状图.

第二是写现在对老人来说，到老人院里比和家里那些忙着工作的下一代在一起要好，说说你的看法。就这些。

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the one who do not know how to use computer become more and more disadvantage.show the disadvantages and what action should government take?

现在不懂电脑会落后于时代，说说你的看法,有人认为政府有责任解决这个问题，你认为有哪些方法

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Creative artists should be given weth freedom to express their ideas(words,pictures,musics and films .however some people think government should take some restriction with them. to what

extent do you agree or disagree this opinion

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It is found by a survey that the crime rate of young women is increasing. Please state out the possible reasons and solutions.

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Is it fair that some successful sports professionals earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions? Give both sides reasons and state your own opinion.

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旅游业的发展和英语的广泛应用会不会损害其他国家的文化和语言。(xiaoyingzi提供)

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There are some serious problems in schools worldwide resulting from student’s attitude. Analyze the possible reasons for this phenomenon and give your solutions.

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妇女外出工做，政府是否应该为她们的孩子提供看管的人还有设施？(xiaoyingzi提供)

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People doing different kinds of work enjoy different amount of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of leisure time? Give your opinion using some of your own experience.

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Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement in the standard of living. What’s your idea?

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Some people regard animals as the source of food or clothes, and others think that they should be treated like pets. State your opinion from both sides.

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Someone said the age of book has past; videos, computers, televisions and films will present the information. Others think that books and written words will still be necessary in spreading information and in completing education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?

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Some people think that it is a moral obligation for developed countries to provide

international aid to developing countries, while others worry that the aid fund might possibly be misused by the government of the poor countries and could not actually help the poor people to improve their living standard. What is your opinion?

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Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies.

Do you agree or disagree with the opinion? What should the government do?

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There are more and more vehicles in front of your houses, which is very dangerous for cyclists and pedestrians. Besides, many gardens have to make way to highways or expressways. How can we make everyone satisfied?

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Over the past fifty years, young people began to gain status and power lost by old people. What are the causes? Is it a good or bad development?